THAT’S WRONG HINATA! TRY IT AGAIN! AND WE WILL KEEP TRYING UNTIL YOU GET IT RIGHT! yelled Hinata’s father.Y-y-yes sir. Hinata stammered. at that Hinata charged at a dummy and made a 15 hit combo. “NO NO NO HINATA YOUR STILL DOING IT WRONG! Her father then calms down a bit. look focus your chakra at one point and attack like this.” he walks up to one of the dummies and with one fingerbreaks it in half looking as though he only barely touched it. “I told you to break it in one hit now try it again.” y-yes sir Hinata replied she then walks up to the dummy and punches it failing to get the wanted results. “again” commanded her father. she punches the dummy and fails again. “again.” she does the same and fails. “AGAIN!!” yelled hinata’s father this time running on his last nerve “y-yes sir” she replied with her voice breaking up.”ARE YOU CRYING?!?!?!” he asked in a angered tone. THAT IS UNACCEPTABLE! he said now reaching for her arm and grabbing it tightly. “i’m sorry” hinata whimpered trying her hardest to bite back her tears. Her father then pulls her up grabbing her arm even harder. “YOU ARE THE HEIR TO THE CLAN. AND LOOK AT YOU! YOUR YOUNGER SISTER SHOWS MORE PROMISE THAN YOU!” he said hinata looked away which made her father even more angry. he then throws her down. “GET OUT!!” HE YELLED ” GET OUTT I DON’T EVER WANT TO SEE YOUR SORRY FACE AGAIN! YOUU ARE NOT FIT TO BE MY DUATHER!” HE YELLED. F-F-Father? hinata whimpered. “Father i’m— ” her father then give her a cold look that made her stop. ARE YOU STILL HERE?!?!?!? I SAID GET OUT!! now getting ready to hit hinata. after seeing her father strike his fighting stance her eyes widened an nd pupils shrank to terrified to move. her father then charged at her making her run off. >>>>>>>>>
Three days past and no one sees any sign of hinata. All that time she was hiding herself in the woods still terrified from her experience, her already weak self confidence shattered. she was more like emotionless doll now. all she could think of was how much of a disappointment she has been to her family. she was in tremendous emotional pain she couldn’t bear it anymore she wanted a way out. she curled herslef up in a ball and one of her kunais fell from her then a grim thought came to her. “i could just…end it. it’s not like anyone would care. i’m just a weakling who doesn’t even have the the strength to want to live.” she thought “yes I’ll do it will make everyone happy. I’ll be free from this pain and everyone will be free from me.” she started to put on a light smile. “Nuruto. i can’t just go with out telling him how i feel.” she then gets up ” i have to find him” and starts to make her way back to the village. but by the time she got there she lost her nerve and decided to write him a letter instead and give it to one of his team mates she wrote her letter telling how she always admired Naruto and considers him to be strong, and how much she wanted him but never got the courage to even look him in the eye . in the letter she explain why she can’t go on and that she expects him to laugh at her latter and throw it away. At the end of her letter she told him where her body would be. She sneaked around all over town looking for saskuke or sakura. eventually she finds sakura at the memorial stone waiting for her other teammates for training. she approaches her. ” umm Sakura?” Sakura turns around and was surprised to see hinata. “Hinata?!?! where were you?!?! you have to report to Lord Hokage as soon as possible i heard they were going to tag you as a missing nin soon and send assassins after you.” she said hinata only looked down. “Sakura can you give this to Naurto for me?” and hands her the letter “please don’t look at it.” she said. ” hinata it everything alright?” sakura asks after seeing hinata’s expression. “everything’s fine.” she then tried to put on a smile. “do you have any idea when naruto will get the letter?” she asked “umm? oh maybe not for like another hour or so
we came here to train but i came an hour early to do some training of my own.” she said. “i see.” hinata repied “an hours time, that’s plenty of time for me die” she thought to her self. “Well i have to go now, good-bye.” and runs off. sakura was just about to try out a jutsu her sensei told her to learn when naruto and the others came.”ahh i see every one had the seem idea and wanted and early start.” chuckled their sensai. “well i’m surprised your here Kakashi sensai. i mean your know for coming LATE not early ha ha.” naruto pointed out “hmm i suppose so” Kakashi replies. sakura walks up to nurto to give him the letter that hinata left. ” hey naruto i just got this letter from hinata for you” hands the letter to him. naruto opens it and begins to read it. “she was here?” asked Kakashi “yeah although something was off about her.” sakura replied “off?” Kakashi asked. “well yeah i mean i don’t know that much about her but i do know that something was defiantly wro—-.” she was suddenly cut off by naruto. “DARN IT!!!!!! SHE’S GOING TO KILL HERSELF!!!!” naruto exclaimed. “what did you just say?!?!” everyone said at the same time. “COME ONE WE HAVE TO STOP HER!” with that he shot off to stop her with out even telling them where she said she was. “naruto wait! where is she?!?!” Kakashi yell but it was too late he was out of hearing range. “come one we have to follow him” he shouted.>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Back in the forest near a lake hinata was in tears and got her kunai ready to stab herself in her heart just as she was about to take her own life another kunai flew in and knocked hers out of her hand. she looked in the direction of the other kunai to see that it was naruto who threw it. she just sat there on the ground thinking it was just some sort of dream. nartuo dashed at her with and anger yet concerned look on his face and tone in his voice and slapped her. ” YOU IDIOT!!!! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU CAN ACCOMPHICE FROM DYING?!?!” he shouted. Hinata looked down in shame saying nothing only starting to tear up. “YOUR LETTING SOMETHING AS STUPID AS WHAT OTHER PEAOPLE THINK OF YOU PUSH YOU TO THIS!?!?! he shouted the rest of his team now arriving in the area. Kakashi noted that naruto dropped the letter and read it. ” hmm i see..” he said to himself. And then looked at naruto and hinata and held sakura and saskue back before they got too close and explained the situation to them. naruto now calmed down and began to talk the hinata normally. “look at me the joker of the entire village. People despise me just because i’m alive.” he explaned. “Even long before i started pulling pranks everyone hated me and i never knew way. It turns out that i had the nine tailed fox sealed up in me by the forth hokake when i was just a baby.” he ponited out. “wouldn’t you know it? everyone hates me cos i have a demon sealed up inside me. to top that off i never had any say whater or not it had to be sealed in me. Every time i walk down the street i can feel every ones hate towards me. it drove me insane. So in the end i was always alone. But despite this i would NEVER try to go the easy way out like you were trying to do.” he told her “so your family thinks your weak. SO WHAT? let that be your drive. The drive to prove them wrong” Hinata reacted slightly to that statement. “if you want why not train with our team on your free time?” he puts on a big smile. ” maybe you’ll learn a thing or two something that will trow your family and anyone else who thinks you weak for a loop.” Hinata looked at Naruto square in the eye “you….you care for me?” she asked. naruto was surprised at this question. “uh yeah believe it!!” he replied hinata broke down in tears right then and there and wrapped her arms around naruto. Kakashi and the rest of the team decided it would be best they leave before they were noticed to avoid an embarrassing situation. Before leaving he puts the letter on the ground so it can be found so they will never know that everyone else knew about what happened and told the team to keep this a secret. After several minutes of crying and holding naruto she starts to clam down starts to get up. ” thank you naruto.” she said ” don’t mention it but it was more luck than anything if i didn’t gone to training early i would have gotten you letter too late.” he replied. “it’s almost as if fate didn’t want want you to die today. i don’t normally go to training early.” he added after hearing about the letter hinata’s face turn cherry red. “y-y-you read the letter?…. all of it?” she asked ” yeah all of it.” replied naruto. at that point only one thing when thought hinata’s mind. “it’s now or never, it’s now or never, it’s now or never” she walked up to naruto and pressed her lips against his. this took naruto by surprise but go use to it almost right away and pushed his tongue in hinata’s mouth. This took her by surprise but then she tilted her head, closed her eyes, and let herself drift away. Hinata’s shyness came back and broke off the kiss. ” Ohh i-i sorry i should have asked.” she stammered ” it’s OK you can do that anytime” nartuo replied. ” really?” she asked “sure” naruto replied and just as he finished talking she kissed him again. and decided to try and put her shyness aside for once. She took off her cloths. This made Narutos face beat red and turned around immeaditly. “it’s OK you can look i want you to have me” Hinata said sending her blushing again. Naruto turned around and shook his head and looked at her perfect body. her breasts were small but suited her perfectly. her ass was perfectly round. after looking at her for a few seconds naruto took of his clothes as well. Hinata when down on the ground and pulled naruto down with her. Naruto began to suck on one of her hard nipples and squeeze the other. doing this made hinata blush and then suddenly naruto moved to her lower area. This made her body arch and moaned with pleasure. “uuuhhhmmmm naru– ahh” naruto pushed his tongue in her as far as he could. this made hinata crazy and pushed him away. she wanted to main course now naruto sensed this and started to push his hard manhood in hinata slit when he felt resistance. “Hinata this might hurt are you sure?” Hinata nodded and with that he slowly pushed his erect manhood inside her. Hinata cried out as she lost her virginity. When Naruto was in he kept still and kissed her so she could get her mind off the pain. After it eased off hinata put her arms and legs around naruto and nodded. Telling him it was OK to start. He started pumping slowly making her gasp and moan. naruto started to pick up the speed making Hinata even more excited. Then after a few minutes naruto suddenly stopped and asked “do you want to be on top?” Hinata still blushing nods yes and goes on top of naruto and slides his dick back in her “oh naruto” she shouted. ” ahh hinata” he called back. she started to ride naruto then they both started to feel this intense over powering feeling. they were about to cum. Hinata went faster and faster both of them filling the air with moans of pleasure naruto could barely hold it anymore. “hinata! i’m—” he’s cut off ” me too! it’s OK let me have it! ” just then naruto felt her contract around him and wrapped his arms around her and gave her one final hard and sudden push which made Hinata cried out in pleasure as she felt Narutos hot liquid shoot inside her and naruto felt all her girl juice trickling all over him. “wow that was great we have to do that again” naruto said. “yes” Hinata replied with a blush on her face.
and then they both fell asleep on the ground.